Haiku?
You are on your ladder
I am on mine
For you yours - for me, mine
You can safely relate it to
Lakum
Deenakum
Walay ya Deen.
PS. No, niether an interpretation, nor a translation [Na Auzo biIllah], just a vague and wild thought.
PPS. I know, 17 syllables don't necessarily mean great haiku!!!
I am on mine
For you yours - for me, mine
You can safely relate it to
Lakum
Deenakum
Walay ya Deen.
PS. No, niether an interpretation, nor a translation [Na Auzo biIllah], just a vague and wild thought.
PPS. I know, 17 syllables don't necessarily mean great haiku!!!
10:34 AM
17 words ... or even more or lesser - whatever ... But I certainly LIKED it a lot ... You are certainly maturing ...!
ps: why dont you shift to wordpress - It's FAR FAR FAR better than this old blogger ... ?